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While visiting Calhoun
Middle/High School last week, I encountered
Casey
Harris,
fifth grade English teacher, in the hallway. She uses The Calhoun
Chronicle weekly in her class, which means all fifth graders get the
paper each week. This is her second year at CMS.
For some
reason, it had not occurred to me that I have a whole new class of kids
reading this year--a whole new class I had not yet met.
Harris
invited me to visit, and when finished in the office, down the hallway I
went.
In fifth
grade, I was a geeky, round-faced kid with two front teeth half grown in
and a
Dorothy
Hamill
haircut (kids, you’ll have to look that one up). I attended a third
through sixth elementary school set along the banks of the
Ohio River,
just below where the
Muskingum River flowed in.
In every class I had on the river’s side of the building, I was
distracted by each barge that traveled by.
We tried to
hatch goose and chicken eggs that year. After days of begging, my
parents agreed to let me have something that hatched, but the electric
went off one weekend during the incubation and none of the eggs ever
became anything other than just eggs. I do believe my parents were
relieved.
I remember
one morning, in the damp valley fog, my creative writing class all filed
together, down the hall and stairs, out the back side of the building,
across the teacher’s parking lot, along the river bank, where we were
told to spread out, sit quiet, and write a haiku poem. I wrote four:
a bridge is forming
beyond the
foggy morning
no cars pass
over
waves are splashing
onto the muddy bank
soaking my two feet
many trashy
banks
humanity has
ruined
a beautiful
sight
a little fossil
imprints marking a large rock
making it bumpy
As far as school
memories, I don’t remember my teachers that year, or how I felt about
life at the time, what I liked or disliked, or who my friends were. I
don’t recall any worries, any fears, any issues beyond the eggs that
didn’t hatch, and that I was assigned to do the
Louisiana
mini-float for the “Parade of 50 States” class project that rolled, with
much festivity and fanfare, down the long hallway at the end of the
year.
Sure,
I remember the faded barges of repeated memories, for I have now seen
thousands of barges in my lifetime around that river. Each one seems the
same, yet when I think today of the
Ohio River
from Marietta,
the faded view from my fifth grade window comes to mind . . . and then,
clear as day, it is that morning along the waters. I’m there again
somehow in a dream and I can close my eyes and see it--the fog, the
bridge, the trash, the fossil.
See, I remember that
morning along the river like it was yesterday, because the poems that I
wrote at that moment grabbed those images and feelings and kept them for
me. So when I read them now, I can relive that memory.
Writing
doesn’t always have to be complicated. It doesn’t have to include long
words or fancy phrases; doesn’t always require capital letters or
punctuation. One of the great things about poetry is that while some
forms of poetry make strict rules (like 5 syllables -7 syllables -5
syllables), other forms of poetry have no rules at all.
That morning along the
river bank, with my fifth grade English class, I was first introduced to
haiku and poetry. I have written nearly 10 poems since then, most
created whenever I wanted to record a moment, or express and explore an
emotion, or mark a memory I never want to forget.
Why don’t
you try it?
It’s as
simple as 5-7-5.
I would like to invite all Calhoun fifth graders (in
Ms. Harris’ class, an
alternative class or home schooled) to send us their haiku. I will
include a few in each week’s issue throughout this season for our
readers to enjoy. In fact, all readers are encouraged to participate in
this exercise and share their results. |